Angel of Death

I love dystopia! And I love this idea. Also, human sacrifices seem like a lovely way to start off a story.

Hello there! I'm Angel. This is my first review since I last logged in so it might be a little rusty. For starters, I really liked this and I think ...

Wow. I really like this. The rhyme scheme was consistent and for someone who doesn't normally write poetry you did a great here. Well done. :) - Angel

This was very enchanting. I really like image your words create. Though this was spontaneous, keep in mind that you don't have to use fancy metaphors to make the poem ...

I usually look for character names by meaning. Generally, I create my character and have a good sense of his/her personality, and then pick a name that fits (baby name ...

Definitely can't say no to this question. I think people should review everything that they read; especially if they they think a work is too good to be critiqued. Sometimes ...

Hey devin! It's great that you started writing poetry at 13, and I believe that this could be a wonderful wonderful poem, but the formatting is all wrong. As of ...

Hey Hibiscus! First off, I really really like this. You have a wonderful, poetic vocabulary and I would have liked this to be a bit longer, but the short length ...

Hey there StreetRat! I'm Angel and I'll be your reviewer today. :) Interesting poem you have here. I love the emotions that you're trying to get across, but the way ...

Hey Kylan! Long time, no read, eh? This was extremely well-written, as always. And I have to disagree with Firestarter. There is conflict, just not the kind that is visible. ...

Inspiration comes from the world around you. Take a walk. Inhale every detail. Focus on something you might not usually focus on. Like the color of the clouds or the ...

Your Love is like the Sun Your love is like the sun, it changes with the day Sometimes it is blissful and young Other times it just drifts away Your ...

Lol. Thanks! It feels great to be back. *hugs* For Nessie Your lips are wilting petals, forever pulling down, down, down, your eyes the shade of the sky, as the ...

So I haven't been on here in a while, but I hope to become more active on YWS again soon. I know that I am late for NaPoWriMo but I ...

I love this place. YWS is not just a site for writers, it's a site for friends who help each other through life and through revisions and plot holes. I ...